The article I chose was published in The New York Times November 4, 2017, by
Laura Hilgers. The title is “Let’s Open Up About Addiction and Recovery.” I found the lead in this newspaper article particularly well-written and captivating. The
lead went as follows:
“Fay Zenoff recently met
a friend for dinner at a sushi restaurant in Sausalito, Calif. After they were
seated, a waitress asked if they’d like wine with dinner. Her friend ordered
sake. Ms. Zenoff declined. “Not for me,” she said. “I’m celebrating 10 years of
sobriety this weekend.”
Because of the stigma
attached to addiction, Ms. Zenoff, who is 50, took a risk speaking so openly.
But when she and her friend finished eating, the waitress reappeared. This time
she carried ice cream with a candle in it and was accompanied by fellow members
of the restaurant staff. They stood beside Ms. Zenoff’s table, singing “Happy
Birthday.” The evening, Ms. Zenoff recalled, was “just amazing.”
This lead works because
the writer keeps the reader anticipating the why behind the subject’s story. I found the waitress’s reaction to
Ms. Zenoff’s the most interesting part of
the lead. It ended with a simple, yet great, quote. This is an example of a
narrative lead which tells a story that includes dialogue, scene setting, and
gives off subtle clues to what might happen next. This lead also focuses on a
person, Fay Zenoff, and tells her story of sobriety.
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