Now, on to actual headlines.
While scanning the headlines on Yahoo I realized many things, but the worst was how terrible people can be. The headlines for the most part are well-written, however the content leaves something to be desired.
That headline was an eye grabber, but others were just as brutal. The headline is very effective in translating the horror of the story, while also leaving you needing to read about it. I particularly like the verb shoving. It makes the act sound more brutal and with that topic, that would be hard to imagine.
As far as bad headlines, I only felt
that too informative headlines about boring stories were an issue. Writing
about budgetary concerns and giving away the major facts in the headline left
me believing I had all the information I needed. And when the story is better
than melatonin to begin with, it will always get walked right by.
That headline is definitely shocking!
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